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Nice job.

Seemed to be lacking much of a story, but it was still well done. The only problem I really had was when Goku swore. I mean, come on, that's almost as bad as say having Babidi be a good guy. Anyways, aside from that, very well done.

DuDuL responds:

Oh comeone... SHIT is not such a swore... yea i would agree if he would say
"HOLY MOTHERFUCKER SON OF A BITCH ON MY FUCKING COCK I DONT FUCKING SENSE THAT MOTHERFUCKER VEGETA" yea then i would agree XD

Geez...

Well, I watched it all the way through, and wow was it long. It was too redudant though. I've heard a shortened version of that song, and that may be why I got so bored with it. If you think about it, unless you do a completely different style with your animation for each verse (or maybe every other verse), it'll get boring no matter what they're doing. If it hadn't been for that, I'd say this was way up with other great movies. Ironic that some people (who obviously didn't watch it) say it was too short, when in my opinion it was too LONG. You can probably tell that I haven't seen Lost, but that doesn't change the fact that it's on here to be seen by both those who have seen it and those who haven't. If / When you do another, consider making it shorter, or at least much more varied. I didn't time it, but after I while I was just waiting for it to end, and I'll bet many other people were too. Despite that, it was still well done, especially the animation. Good luck in the future.

CapnBob responds:

That's a fair statement to make for people who aren't familiar with the show, but keep in mind that what you're attempting to do is akin to judging the length of a play when you don't speak the language that it's presented in. One of the goals I had in setting out on this was to hit almost every major plot point from an entire television season in lyrical form, and when you know what those are then you may find that there isn't really very much redundancy in the video. So if it's a choice between catering to people in the target audience and everyone else, I'm going to come down on the side of the target audience every time.

That said, I do regret not putting in more silly imagery in every section to keep non-fans entertained, but I kinda had to put a large chunk of my life on hold to get it to this level and I really couldn't afford to do that any longer. I am thinking about doing an enhanced director's cut later, but making a living and being available to friends and family again has to take precedence for now.

Major problem

NEVER "pause" the action just so someone can talk. No only would it never happen, but it looks awful as well. Either keep the animation going (Goku could continue flying on the nimbus while talking) or don't have any animation going on there. And save all the talking for before or after the battle; any in the middle, unless done without interrupting it, while only do just that: interrupt it! Good plot though... I'd have to say this is better than your first attempt at Dragonball W(ily?).

Finally! Something that's about Pheonix WRIGHT!

It's about time someone did something about Pheonix Wright without making it a spin-off of all the other Pheonix Wrongs. For that I thank you. Next time just make sure the animations are all cleaned up... on one of them (with the two people on the left side saying he's crazy) I saw a flicker of white. Also, the tear down the wall part was too redundant, even with the different swirls. After a few you should have found something else, perhaps even just move over to the credits. Overall, though, it was quite refreshing.

This has to be the most reviews for such a short

I fully understand the concept of having really long credits and a very short movie. I also fully understand that I didn't find it humorous. For starters, I realized it was going to be nothing but credits extremely quickly. The fact that there were only 2 people only sped up that process. The scores I gave for your "movie" take almost no consideration of the overdone credits. The credits were long, boring, and not funny. If it had been shorter, maybe it would have been more enjoyable. Then again if pigs could fly maybe they'd rule the world. Regardless, my point is only a few people find this funny, and that point is proven by the score you've received.

1st Rule of Thumb: Never bore your audience.

chillyphilly responds:

Shorter credits would have done no justice to the concept of this "movie"
Yeah, it's a bit of a hit and miss joke, but judging from the reviews I'd say the majority got the joke and had some sort of a chuckle.

Movies don't always look to entertain.

MAYBE, the movie is ultimately about getting a reaction from the audience, whether it's positive or negative. As you already said, it's got quite a few reviews for such a short movie and simple joke.
I think I did alright.

Not very much besides the statement

NOW Phoenix Wrong has been overdone. But just for that I think this flash should pass.

Lol

The only humor I'm talking about is the part that says "To click this button you are God! ...unless you used pause...

I didn't use pause, I turned off the play and went back a few frames :P

Flameviper responds:

Yeah, I kind of figured that... :P

This has the elements required for awesome flashes

This is truly an awesome flash. But so many people have already said so I'm not going to leave it at that. Instead, I'm going to talk about WHY this is such an awesome flash, despite being about a rather girly subject.

There are a number of elements required to make a successful flash. The more elements included and the better they are presented the higher the score will be. Some of those include violence, humor (not just smiling but actual laughing), music, sound, art, originality, and a story. Although this flash doesn't have much violence (a tree got chopped down and some male rabbits got tossed away), and it doesn't have too much humor (although it does have some, none of it is really the laughing I mentioned earlier), it DOES have awesome music which is in sync with the animation, AND originality, AND a solid story throughout, AND excellent art. The fact that there were no actual sounds (only the music in the background) was only semi-appropriate, but still easily acceptable.

I am in no way saying that this flash does not deserve its high place because it doesn't have every single element. It is an extremely rare occurence to have some who can not only draw but also make a solid story. I know I couldn't draw to save my life. But you have the gift of both, and I know you have the potential to make even better flashes than this, ones which have more humor and/or violence. If you were to compare this flash to most of the others out there, this flash is easily better. In fact, it's no comparison. In itself, it is flawless. But the story behind it is not perfect; it lacks some elements which could make it even better. Looking at the second one I can understand why it has a slightly better rank. Compared to the first one, it has almost exactly the same elements. It is even equally original, which is hard to do when you make a sequel to an already completed story. However, it has a little more violence and humor (the "fight" with the angry rabbits). I could go on and on about the second one, but instead I'll save that for when I finally decide to review it. Consider adding more scenes like that "fight", and you could probably get a much better rank than what you've already got!

This is a very good story, the only thing I would like to see is more violence and humor, even like the "fight" in the second one. This has to be the longest review I've ever written, so it's clear that your flash is extremely good. It's a pity though that you probably won't be able to read it simply because of you trouble with English. But I hope this review will help other flash artists see what is required for an incredible score. I look forward to your next production.

Awesome drawings.

However, I'm not here to judge how well you can draw. That would be quite crazy, since I can't draw worth anything. The superb art will help your score, but not make up for other areas.

For starters, parts of the story were unclear. Until I re-read the comments talking about the story, I had no idea the people were spirits, nor did I realize they were a couple. Those parts could have been shown in some way, or simply not mentioned at all.

Also, the story seemed quite bare outside of the art. Girl is sad, plays music, boy hears music, goes to girl, girl and boy are happy again. Because of the short plot, the movie seemed short, which is never a good thing.

All in all, it is a burger that looks good, but lacks taste. Still, well done, especially for a first submission.

Sigh...

This is such old stuff it's not even funny. But I'm not here to complain about it, for once. You know what might give one of yours a significant score boost? If you editted Hitler so that he was in color. Now I know that Hitler never has a color picture taken of him, but it would still boost your score for the change of pace. And actually it should be too hard with photoshop either...

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Don't make fun of Hitler's pigmentation defect.

Exactly.

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